In High5 we have been practising writing to describe. That means we are trying to get the reader to see what we see, we are using our words to create a picture. We have been adding details to our writing to help make the picture clearer.
Our job is to do this planning and write our own story about a person in our family that is special to us.
- I planned my writing
- I added details (what I can see, how my person moves, what I might hear from my person)
- I did some fixing by myself
How I am going
I planned my writing
I added details (what I can see, how my person moves, what I might hear from my person)
I did some fixing by myself
My favourite part was: writing and planning my writing
It was really hard when: we wanted to talk but we could't talk
Something that really helped me was: my thingking
Something new I learned was: planing my writing help keeps my Idea
What a beautiful piece of writing Awhina.You have thought hard about what you know and have written from your heart. Remember to add loads of ideas to your plan so you can use it as you write.
Remember, when you are reflecting on your learning please add some more details. You can do this by adding a because.