Sunday, 6 September 2015

My writing

Writing
In High5 we have been practising writing to describe. That means we are trying to get the reader to see what we see, we are using our words to create a picture. We have been adding details to our writing to help make the picture clearer.

Task:
Our job is to do this planning and write our own story about a person in our family that is special to us.

Success Criteria:
  • I planned my writing 
  • I added details (what I can seehow my person moveswhat I might hear from my person)
  • I did some fixing by myself
My writing:























How I am going


I planned my writing
Kerri thinks


I added details (what I can seehow my person moveswhat I might hear from my person)
Kerri thinks

I did some fixing by myself
Kerri thinks

Reflection

My favourite part was: writing and planning my writing 

It was really hard when: we wanted to talk but we could't talk

Something that really helped me was: my thingking

Something new I learned was: planing my writing help keeps my Idea

Kerri thinks
What a beautiful piece of writing Awhina.You have thought hard about what you know and have written from your heart. Remember to add loads of ideas to your plan so you can use it as you write.

Remember, when you are reflecting on your learning please add some more details. You can do this by adding a because.

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