Saturday, 23 May 2015

Telling my Story

On Friday 15th of May we had the Junior School cross-country. We ran hard in the mud and the puddles; some of us even ran up and down Cycle Mountain!
We decided to tell our cross-country stories. We have done this in two ways. Firstly we wrote our story. We used our senses to help add some details to our writing. We thought about what we could see, what we could hear, what we could feel and how we felt in our heart.
We also told our story in ‘code’. With Carolyn we thought about how we can use paint and symbols to share our story. Again we thought about what we could see, what we could hear, what we could feel and how we felt in our heart.

Success Criteria:
  • Plan my writing
  • Add details to my writing
  • Create a code to tell my story
  • Speak clearly and with expression as I tell my story

How I am going
Plan my writing
Kerri thinks




Add details to my writing
Kerri thinks




Create a code to tell my story
Kerri thinks




Speak clearly and with expression as I tell my story
Kerri thinks




Reflection

I really like: when I did my planIng because it was good.

I think I need to practice: I need to practice my stuff and don't look at someone else's writing.

Something that really helped me was: the book because it has lot's of words in it.

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